Hey all, this is the were i'm going to publish my story, as i write it.
What you will find here is the rough draft of the story.  It isn't nearlly done.  but this is were i am going to place it in the hopes of getting feedback. 
If you like the story please tell me, if you don't like please tell me.  also please tell me why.

I can be contacted at both:
WildCard521@aol.com
JKyleHillhouse@yahoo.com

also you can contact me through ym at:
JKyleHillhouse

Thank you for viewing and for the feed back.  tell 9inform my of how you feel about this story.